My name is Tang Yijiao. I am twelve years old. I am a student in Grade Six. In my class, I have two good friends. They are Liang Mengtian and Zhang Tianci.
Liang Mengtian is a nice girl. She is eleven years old. She has big black eyes and a small nose. She has a round face and her hair is long.She is in a pink coat. It is her favorite color. She likes it very much.
She is often in a pink coat and pink pants. Her favorite actor is Tang Yan. She has many pictures of him. She likes English very much,and she can speaks English very well. She often helps me with my English.
Zhang Tianci is a sunny boy. His is twelve years old, too. We are at the same age. He is from Guangzhou. He is tall and strong. He has big eyes, a long nose and a wide mouth. His hair is short.
He is in a white T-shirt and blue pants. His shoes and cap are black. He looks very cool like an actor. In my class, his Chinese is the best of all. He often helps me study Chinese.
Liang Mengtian, Zhang Tianci and I are classmates. We often help each other and learn from each other. You see, we are really good friends.
师评：小作者文中的两个好朋友，人物介绍详尽，外貌描写及穿着打扮让人如见其人，好朋友之间经常互相帮助，互相学习，值得称赞。